Hi Druv,
I am happy with Rev. 26 as all of the nits I had detected have been resolved.
Regards,
Behcet
On Tue, Jun 4, 2024 at 11:42 AM Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hi Behcet,Thanks for your review....On Mon, May 27, 2024 at 6:07 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Document: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-??
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2024-05-27
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-30
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:This document presents a YANG data model generally applicable to any
mode of Virtual Network operations. The effort that went into the document is appreciated.
The document is well written and understandable.
Major issues:None
Minor issues:None
Nits/editorial comments:
The YANG model has been checked by YANGDOCTORS and the issues found have been cleared by Rev. 25.
I list here the nits I found:
Section 1. MDSC <- MSDC (only one occurrence)
Section 1.2
this this document. (only one this is OK)
The document has 3 figures with the last one in Section 2.2
afterwards the figure notation is dropped and illustration notation is used.
Note. This is just a comment no action needed.
These have been updated - https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/Thanks,Dhruv
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