[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bpf-isa-02

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Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-bpf-isa-02
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2024-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document specifies the BPF instruction set architecture (ISA). The
document is clear and well-written. No major issues were found, just some minor
suggestions.

Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:

* In the introduction, maybe?: "eBPF (which is no longer an acronym for
anything), also commonly referred to as BPF" --> eBPF (which originally stood
for "extended Berkeley Packet Filter" but is no longer an acronym), also
commonly referred to as BPF...

* It would be nice to add caption to the tables (from Table 3 to Table 18).

Thanks for this document,

Ines



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