[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11

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Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-05-07
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30
IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16

Summary: This document is well written and clear.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:

s/re-start/restart
s/IA-Address/IA Address



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