Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready
I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area
Directors. Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.
Document: draft-ietf-wish-whip-14
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-05-09
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-04
IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16
Summary: Ready
Major Concerns: None
Minor Concerns: None
Nits:
IDnits offers these complaints:
** There are 15 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest
one being 45 characters in excess of 72.
== There are 2 instances of lines with non-RFC6890-compliant IPv4 addresses
in the document. If these are example addresses, they should be changed.
-- The document has examples using IPv4 documentation addresses according
to RFC6890, but does not use any IPv6 documentation addresses. Maybe
there should be IPv6 examples, too?
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