Looks good!
On 4/3/24 11:09 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
Hi Paul,
Thanks again for your careful review. -07 resolves the malformed section
reference:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-06&url2=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-07&difftype=--html
Thanks,
Corey
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Corey,
On 4/3/24 8:45 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
Hello Paul,
Thank you for your detailed review and insightful feedback. We have
just uploaded -06 to the Datatracker:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis/.
We believe -06 addresses all the concerns that you raised. Please let
us know if there are still unresolved items.
Yes, you have nicely addressed all my concerns. But one error crept in:
In sec 3.2.1 there is "{#sha1-sec}". I presume this is intended to be a
reference that has been mangled.
Thanks,
Paul
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