Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review result: Ready with Nits
This draft is a bit unusual: it reads like an informational document, but there
are a few instances of RFC2119 key-words (about https URIs at the Call
Placement Service (CPS), and (m)TLS between OOB-AS and CPS), so I guess the PS
status is OK even though a bit "weak."
The two requirements around the use of TLS in §5 could do with a reference to
9325.
Nits:
# Section 1
s/transitting/transiting/
s/to the PSTN,/to the PSTN/
# Section 3
s/but nor does/nor does/
s/PSTN/Public Switched Telephone Network (PSTN)/
# Section 4
s/services providers/service providers/
s/numnber/number/
s/originating domains has/originating domain has/
s/within a scope of an SPC/within the scope of an SPC/
s/TN based/TN-based/
s/signed by a CA, and contain their own/signed by a CA and contain their/
# Section 5
s/caller (or callee), to the degree/caller (or callee) to the degree/
s/A CPS can use this mechanism can authorize/A CPS can use this mechanism to
authorize/ s/connection, if there is/connection if there is/ s/Furthermore, use
of/Furthermore, the use of/ s/although use of transport-layer security/although
the use of TLS/
# Section 6
s/means that called parties can acquire PASSporTs/means by which called parties
can acquire PASSporTs/ s/or through a subscription interface/or a subscription
interface/ s/calls arrive, or receive/calls arrive or receive/
# Section 7
s/legacy providers, and also/legacy providers and also/
# Section 8
s/for contributions/for {his,her,their} contributions/
# Section 10
s/an entity contractual acting/an entity contractually acting/
s/telephone numbers ranges/telephone number ranges/
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