Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu Review result: Ready I've reviewed version 10, and this is a follow up review. Thanks to the authors for working on this document and addressing my comments. The document readability has improved a lot from my last review of version -10, and I believe it is ready for publication. There are a couple of nits for the authors to consider. The line numbers are generated using idnits. 160 is being done by using the Internet Control Message Protocol (ICMP) nits: there should be a "." in the end. 166 traffic between DetNet nodes with IP DetNet traffic, e.g., ensure 167 that such ICMP traffic uses the DetNet IP data plane in each node, nits: somehow this sentence doesn't read well to me. "uses the DetNet IP data plane" is not very clear to me, I think you're trying to say ICMP traffic should go through the same path/interface as DetNet traffic, for example, there is ECMP between two DetNet nodes. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
