Re: [Last-Call] [netconf] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20

["Wubo \(lana\)" <lana.wubo=40huawei.com@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Kent,

 

Thanks for addressing my comments and the clarification below. And I have no further comments.

 

Thanks,

Bo

 

发件人: Kent Watsen <kent@xxxxxxxxxx>
发送时间: 2024年2月9日 7:39
收件人: Wubo (lana) <lana.wubo@xxxxxxxxxx>
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主题: Re: [netconf] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20

 

Hi Bo,

 

Thank you for your valuable comments.

Please find responses below.

 

Kent

 

On Feb 8, 2024, at 11:05 AM, Bo Wu via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

 

Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Ready

Hi all,

This document defines three YANG grouping modules for the configuration of TCP
clients and TCP servers. The document is well written and I think it is ready
for publication. I have two minor comments below for reference.

1. Change the YANG Copyright date in the three YANG modules to 2024.

 

I have updated the dates in all of the YANG modules in all nine of the drafts.

 

2. For section 2.1.4, section 3.1.3, section 4.1.3 Protocol-accessible Nodes,
perhaps a reference of draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp can be added as an example?

 

The references are the other way around.  That document imports the “ietf-tcp-common” module here: 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp-09#name-tcp-yang-model.

 

Thus I don’t think a reference is needed.  Agreed?

 

Thanks,
Bo Wu

 

Thanks again,

Kent

 

 

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