Re: [Last-Call] [netconf] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tcp-client-server-20

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Hi Bo,

Thank you for your valuable comments.
Please find responses below.

Kent


On Feb 8, 2024, at 11:05 AM, Bo Wu via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Ready

Hi all,

This document defines three YANG grouping modules for the configuration of TCP
clients and TCP servers. The document is well written and I think it is ready
for publication. I have two minor comments below for reference.

1. Change the YANG Copyright date in the three YANG modules to 2024.

I have updated the dates in all of the YANG modules in all nine of the drafts.


2. For section 2.1.4, section 3.1.3, section 4.1.3 Protocol-accessible Nodes,
perhaps a reference of draft-ietf-tcpm-yang-tcp can be added as an example?

The references are the other way around.  That document imports the “ietf-tcp-common” module here: 

Thus I don’t think a reference is needed.  Agreed?


Thanks,
Bo Wu

Thanks again,
Kent


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