Thanks for your response. Sounds like you will address all the issues I raised. >> I was surprised that the Abstract did not include more text from Section 1. >What text did you expect to see? I added a new sentence to the Abstract. Most RFCs and drafts that I have seen duplicate the abstract into the introduction. I am not recommending you do that, just that your draft was unusual in my experience. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
