Hi Peter, Thank you for your comments. > Page 4, second paragraph, second sentence: change "MPLS based" to "MPLS-based". Fixed > Page 4, section 1.1: in the text version that I read, the boilerplate contains > the link "(https://tools.ietf.org/html/bcp14)". While this is found as a > hyperlink in the PDF and HTML versions, I don't believe it should appear in the > text version. I don't know if this is a tool issue, but recent RFCs that I > downloaded did not contain it. The hyperlink appears to cause idnits to > complain about incorrect boilerplate text. Fixed. > Page 6, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change "i.e. Ethernets" to "i.e., > Ethernets", which is to say, change the first space to a comma. Fixed. > Page 9, last paragraph, last sentence: change "implementation-dependent" to > "implementation dependent”. Fixed. Thank you! Tony -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
