Reviewer: Susan Hares Review result: Ready Summary: I want to thank the authors for a clearly written specification. Technical: To my best review, this draft has considered the operational issues in the privacy pass issuance protocol. The error handling appears to be correct. Editorial: I can find no editorial issues. Caveat: I am not deeply involved in the deployment of these protocols or security. The error handling portion of this security protocol needs a review by someone who is an expert in these protocols. It appears to be correct, but I am not enough of an expert to double-check anything beyond the references. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
