Florian, Your issues should be resolved in draft-09. A sub-section/paragraph has been added to address your feedback. Please review "A note on names". Name: draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis Revision: 09 Title: Universally Unique IDentifiers (UUID) Document date: 2023-08-04 Group: uuidrev Pages: 51 URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-09.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis/ Html: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-09.html Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-09 Thanks, -----Original Message----- From: Kyzer Davis (kydavis) <kydavis@xxxxxxxxx> Sent: Thursday, July 27, 2023 4:39 PM To: Florian Obser <fobser@xxxxxxxx>; dnsdir@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; uuidrev@xxxxxxxx Subject: RE: Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-08 Thank you Florian, I have filed an issue and typed up my thoughts over on GitHub: https://github.com/ietf-wg-uuidrev/rfc4122bis/issues/121 -----Original Message----- From: Florian Obser via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Wednesday, July 26, 2023 11:08 AM To: dnsdir@xxxxxxxx Cc: draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx; uuidrev@xxxxxxxx Subject: Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-uuidrev-rfc4122bis-08 Reviewer: Florian Obser Review result: Ready with Issues I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs. For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir This document reference the DNS as one of multiple possible name spaces for Name-Based UUID Generation. It has no considerations that reflect on the DNS. Issue: The document does not reference any DNS RFCs. Section 5.3, 5.5 and 6.5 refer to "a canonical sequence of octets in network byte order". It is not specified what that canonical sequence is nor is there a reference to a document that specifies the canonical sequence for any of the name spaces. Section 6.5 also has this: * UUIDs generated at different times from the same name in the same namespace MUST be equal. It is unclear to me how to implement that MUST if there is not a single canonical sequence specified for a given name space, as is the case for DNS. For DNS RFC 8499 has this: Format of names: Names in the global DNS are domain names. There are three formats: wire format, presentation format, and common display. The test vectors in Appendix C use the common display format, i.e. they leave off the root label and the "." before it. I'm not sure how best to address this issue, options include: - refer to specifications for all the name spaces and point at the canonical sequence (in case of DNS this means RFC 8499 and choosing common display) - mark it out of scope, like is done for "uniqueness within their name spaces". - mark it out of scope, but point out that applications must (MUST?) agree on what the canonical sequence is. Nits: 4. UUID Format old: the version bits described in the next sections in determine new: the version bits described in the next sections determine 6.5. Name-Based UUID Generation old: but the hashspace should be used to as the starting point new: but the hashspace should be used as the starting point
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