Thanks Reese, Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. All comments accepted and addressed except... > Please consider redrawing the figures using SVG instead of ASCII. > Especially Figure 4 would greatly benefit from this enhancement. I think Figure is about as complex as they get, and it doesn't delight me. But using SVG is a step too far for me. > Section 6.3 > > "The controller provides the following functions. > […] > Determines an abstract topology connecting the SDPs of the IETF Network Slice > that meets criteria specified via the IETF Network Slice Service Interface" > > I find "determine" to be an odd choice of words if this phrase is about > implementing the Slice. I suggest using "identify" or a similar term. I went for "selects" as "identify" has two meanings. Best, Adrian -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
