Re: [Last-Call] [nvo3] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-10

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Hi Magnus,


Thank you for the prompt reply.

A new version has just been posted to address your comments. Link as below.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-11

I also cc BFD WG to see if some new ideas can be motivated by your good observation.


Best Regards,

Xiao Min

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Hi Xiao Min,

 

I think that text is mostly fine, I would think that this RECOMMENDED needs to be a “MUST unless BFD is congestion controlled”. That later part as a caveat if one can actually deploy a BFD congestion control.  

 

I would really recommend routing area to look into this problem of how to separate path failures, from on path congestion (especially self inflicted), or endpoint overload. Which appears to be the different things desired to be separated for BFD.

 

Note, I don’t expect congestion control for BFD to look like TCP at all. I would expect it to be something may be fairly slow in reaction, which allows BFD in those deployments where it is needed to step down the load on the network and the end points to see if the failure to get all/some packets through are dependent on the introduced load.

 

Cheers

 

Magnus

 

 

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Date: Tuesday, 4 July 2023 at 08:49
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Subject: Re: [nvo3] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-10

Hi Magnus,

 

Thank you for the review and thoughtful comments.

Please see inline.

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Subject: [nvo3] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-10

Reviewer: Magnus Westerlund
Review result: Not Ready

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I have reviewed BFD for Geneve (draft-ietf-nvo3-bfd-geneve-10) and have one
significant point on this protocol. So when BFD was published after quite some
discussion about the lack of an actual congestion control mechanism in BFD in
RFC 5880 there was agreement on the following that was included in Section 7 of
RFC 5880:

   When BFD is used across multiple hops, a congestion control mechanism
   MUST be implemented, and when congestion is detected, the BFD
   implementation MUST reduce the amount of traffic it generates.  The
   exact mechanism used is outside the scope of this specification, and
   the requirements of this mechanism may differ depending on how BFD is
   deployed, and how it interacts with other parts of the system (for
   example, exponential backoff may not be appropriate in cases where
   routing protocols are interacting closely with BFD).

As this usage of BFD although is point to point inside the tunnel, the fact
that it is a tunnel and can bridge both multisegment L2 and especially IP
networks means that this document in my view need to define how it fulfills the
above requirements when using BFD.

I do note the security consideration do note that overload is a factor due to
multiple path sharing tunnel establishments. So there are apparently risks from
two types of overlad situations here. First that multiple tunnles between
endpoints are established. Secondly, that there are congestion due to network
cross traffic on the paths the tunnels share.

So I think there are two paths forward. Either restrict the applicability of
this usage to paths where it is known to have provisioned capacity for the BFD,
as noted as required in RFC 5881 applicability statement. The alternative is to
extend BFD to actually have a real congestion control. Something I think would
have benefit all considering how wide spread use there is of BFD over various
overlay networks that really are ignoring this potential issue.

[XM]>>> I lean to the former one. Propose to add a new paragraph to the last of Introduction section.

NEW

As specified in Section 4.2 of [RFC8926], Geneve MUST be used with congestion-controlled traffic
or within a traffic-managed controlled environment (TMCE) to avoid congestion, that requirement
applies to BFD traffic too. Specifically, considering the complexity and immaturity of BFD congestion
control mechanism, BFD for Geneve is RECOMMENDED to be used within a TMCE. An operator of a
TMCE deploying BFD for Geneve is required to provision the rates at which BFD is transmitted to
avoid congestion and false failure detection.

 

To conclude I am of the oppinion that this document should not be approved for
publication until this issue of congestion control is handled one way of
another.
[XM]>>> Please check the proposed new text and let me know whether your concern is addressed.

Thanks,

Xiao Min

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