Mallory, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On May 16, 2023, at 15:49, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Mallory Knodel > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-?? > Reviewer: Mallory Knodel > Review Date: 2023-05-16 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-11 > IESG Telechat date: 2023-05-25 > > Summary: This document obsoletes another and is nearly identical in text and > format, except for the critical text that has been updated. Therefore I think > very few changes can or even should be made other than the incisive changes > proposed by the authors. Only two small editorial suggestions: one is a > stylistic choice and up to the discretion of the authors and the second is a > typographical error. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * It's unclear why message type names appear in parenthesis, rather than > simply without, in sub-sections 4.x. * In IANA Considerations, "non- default" > should be "non-default". > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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