Reviewer: David Blacka Review result: Ready This is a followup review of version -16 of the I-D. The initial review was for -15. The primary advice (which was to add some terms to the Terminology section) was followed, and the additions are both appreciated and are concisely and clearly written. I also had some language nits, and a number of them were addressed. The nits that were not addressed were explicitly rejected by the editor. I don't feel very strongly about them, so I am happy to defer to the editors. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
