Joel, thanks for your review! I have entered a Discuss ballot for this document. Lars > On 8. Oct 2022, at 04:13, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-lsp-ping-08 > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review Date: 2022-10-07 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-18 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: N/A > > Nits/editorial comments: > Should the RDs in section 6.1 and 6.2 use example IP addresses instead of > 1.1.1.1 and 2.2.2.2? (ID Nits called my attention to this, and I could not > decide if it was important. So it is a nit here.) > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call