Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip-08

["A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

    Hi David,

On 3/15/23 8:11 PM, David Schinazi wrote:

I ended up having some spare time between meetings so I went ahead and fixed the capitalization in this commit:

https://github.com/ietf-wg-masque/draft-ietf-masque-connect-ip/commit/302ff1339f404d6a9a05f31337b5ec70b5639adc

    [JM] Thanks for making these updates!
    Jean

Thanks again!

David

On Wed, Mar 15, 2023 at 4:21 PM David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Jean, and thanks for the review!

I've made a note to check capitalization during AUTH48.

David

On Wed, Mar 15, 2023 at 3:49 PM Jean Mahoney via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:

Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready

Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
Review result: Ready

I found the doc easy to read, and I think it's ready to go.

Some terms are inconsistently capitalized (e.g., Upgrade Token, URI Template,
IP Address), and these could benefit from review.

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