Reviewer: Henry Thompson
Review result: Ready with Nits
I'm the designated ArtArt last call reviewer for this draft.
This is essentially a _pro forma_ update of the corresponding HTTP/2 document.
It's substantially ready to go.
Three nits:
1) The readability of the main paragraph of section 2 could, I think, be
improved.
Instead of
"Where [ORIGIN] indicates that the ORIGIN frame should be sent on Stream 0,
this should be interpreted to mean the HTTP/3 control stream.
The ORIGIN frame is sent from servers to clients on the server's control
stream."
this should (unless I misunderstand it), be a new paragraph, something a bit
more explicit, e.g.:
Where [ORIGIN] indicates that the ORIGIN frame should be sent on Stream 0,
this should be interpreted to mean the appropriate HTTP/3 control stream:
that is, the ORIGIN frame is sent from servers to clients on the server's
(unidirectional) control stream.
2) To match the HTTP/2 and IANA registry entries, the table in section 4 should
read
ORIGIN 0x0c Section 2
3) Again in section 4, it took me rather a long time to chase down the actually
relevant bit of the '[IANA] "HTTP/3 Frame Type" registry [HTTP3]', which is not
in the referenced document at all. Wouldn't a reference to the think itself,
https://www.iana.org/assignments/http2-parameters/http2-parameters.xhtml#frame-type,
be better here?
ht
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