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Objet : Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-
opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09
On 2/20/23 12:42 AM, mohamed.boucadair@xxxxxxxxxx wrote:
Hi Robert,
Thank you for the review.
Please see inline.
Cheers,
Med
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vendredi 17 février 2023 21:30 À : gen-art@xxxxxxxx Cc :
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draft-ietf-opsawg-add-
encrypted-dns-09
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Issues
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Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-add-encrypted-dns-09
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2023-02-17
IETF LC End Date: 2023-02-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary: After addressing an issue, this will be ready for
publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
Issue: draft-ietf-add-dnr needs to be a normative reference, or
some
other mechanic needs to be used to ensure draft-ietf-add-dnr is
published as an RFC before IANA follows the instructions in
this
document.
[Med] 142/166 are permanent assignments. The IANA registry is
authoritative here.
Ok, digging into the registries, I see 144 for OPTION_V6_DNR and
162 for OPTION_V4_DNR. Is that what you meant? If not, what are
142/166 pointing to?
That these are already in the registries addresses the issue I
raised, but please remind me how to find the artifacts that _put_
these points in the registry? I assume something triggered early
permanent assignments for these? I wonder if those should be more
transparently tracked.
Please note that we have the following to make sure that the
registry is in sync vs. DHCP and have this note for IANA:
The initial content of this sub-registry is listed in Table
4. The
Value and Description fields echo those of [DHCPv6].
Changes to the entry in the dhcp options registry will be
automatically reflected in the registry defined by this document.
Nit: The discussion in paragraph 3 of section 3 and the note
that
follows are currently ambiguous. When it calls out that 2865
limits
the size of DHCP options and that 7499 and 7930 relaxes the
limit, is
it only trying to inform where the recommendation of supporting
65535
bytes came from? Or is it trying to constrain the size of any
DHCP
option added to the the attributes defined here to 4096?
[Med] Alan already clarified this one. Please let us know if any
text tweak is needed.
Yes, I do think the document would be improved if it more directly
stated what Alan said in his earlier response.
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