Thomas, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On Jan 24, 2023, at 20:35, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-?? > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review Date: 2023-01-24 > IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-27 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > The document adapts some existing EAP methods (EAP-FAST, EAP-TTLS, TEAP > and PEAP) to be used with TLS 1.3. In particular: > - it defines the new key derivations, > - clarifies the use of client certs, > - describes the rules around processing of application data, > NewSessionTicket and resumption > > The draft is very clearly written and organised. > > The IANA section contains clear, unambiguous instructions. > >> From a gen-art perspective it looks ready to me. > > Major issues: none > > Minor issues: none > > Nits/editorial comments: > > OLD > There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP > methods which necessitates this document. > NEW > There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP > methods which are addressed by this document. > > OLD > Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that > authentication has succeed > NEW > Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that > authentication has succeeded > > Style (feel free to ignore): > - "all of" => all > - "both of [these]" => "both" > - "whether or not" => "whether" > > Typos: > - indicatoin > - deriviation > - identies > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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