Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-10

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Thomas, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Jan 24, 2023, at 20:35, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> 
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> 
> Document: draft-ietf-emu-tls-eap-types-??
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review Date: 2023-01-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-27
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> The document adapts some existing EAP methods (EAP-FAST, EAP-TTLS, TEAP
> and PEAP) to be used with TLS 1.3.  In particular:
> - it defines the new key derivations,
> - clarifies the use of client certs,
> - describes the rules around processing of application data,
>  NewSessionTicket and resumption
> 
> The draft is very clearly written and organised.
> 
> The IANA section contains clear, unambiguous instructions.
> 
>> From a gen-art perspective it looks ready to me.
> 
> Major issues: none
> 
> Minor issues: none
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> OLD
>   There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP
>   methods which necessitates this document.
> NEW
>   There remain some differences between EAP-TLS and other TLS-based EAP
>   methods which are addressed by this document.
> 
> OLD
>   Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that
>   authentication has succeed
> NEW
>   Similarly, when the inner authentication protocol indicates that
>   authentication has succeeded
> 
> Style (feel free to ignore):
> - "all of" => all
> - "both of [these]" => "both"
> - "whether or not" => "whether"
> 
> Typos:
> - indicatoin
> - deriviation
> - identies
> 
> 
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