Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2023-02-09 IETF LC End Date: 2023-02-20 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC Major issues: N/A Minor issues: In the fourth paragraph of section 1.1, the text refers to "a secure association between two TLS Transport Models (TLSTMs)". As I understand the terminology, there is one TLSTM. There are two instances of / realizations of the model. Should the sentence refer to instances or realizations, rather than two models? (i-d nits gets confused by the references to rfc 5953 in the revision description. After looking at it, I realized there was no problem here, rather it is accurate. A comment on this in item 14 of the shepherd writeup would have been helpful.) Nits/editorial comments: N/A -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
