Reviewer: Vincent Roca Review result: Ready Hello, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: ready My comments for version 21 were about a paragraph that has been removed altogether in this update. I have no additional comment. Regards, Vincent -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call