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Document: draft-ietf-ace-extend-dtls-authorize-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-01-20
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-24
IESG Telechat date: ?
Summary:
This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the
review.
Issues: 1
1) ISSUE: Form and completeness of the document
This document reads as a good concept document proposing how RFC 9202
could be revised to allow use of both TLS and DTLS. But it fails to do
the work of actually making those revisions. It leaves that work to the
reader. It is hard to believe that all readers will infer the identical
set of changes.
I suggest that this document's status be changed to an informational,
and then work begin on an rfc9202bis document that incorporates the
proposed changes.
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