Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03 Reviewer: Reese Enghardt Review Date: 2023-01-16 IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-23 IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-02 Summary: This document is clear and concise. It is almost ready for publication, just one minor issue. Major issues: None. Minor issues: In Section 5.1: "Some organizations might not be deterred in either case, while others might now find such an attack to not be feasible." As the cost of the attack decreases, should the "not" be removed in the second part here, so it'll read "others might now find such an attach to be feasible"? Nits/editorial comments: None. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
