[Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06

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Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Has Nits

Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Has Nits

I am the assigned Ops reviewer for this draft. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Sorry for the delay.

Summary:

This document (with intended status Standards Track) describes the
applicability and extension of the Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR)
in the SIP messaging use cases.

Document: draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.2: Last paragraph
OLD:
and the timestamp can order mesages displayed to the user
New
and the timestamp can order messages displayed to the user

Section 3.2.1.:
SMPP- It would be nice if it could be expanded on the first use.

Section 4:
OLD
The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profiles defines a way
NEW:
The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profile defines a way

Thanks,
Bo Wu



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