Reviewer: Claudio Allocchio
Review result: Ready with Nits
Hello,
the ID is essentially a IANA registration of 2 elements, with a good and
detailed analysis of applicability scenarios.
The only nit suggestion is to reformulate the paragraph where "msg" and "msgi"
are introduced into the specification; the current version is:
In order to differentiate a PASSporT for an individual message from a
PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream, this
document defines a new "msg" PASSporT Type. "msg" PASSporTs may carry
a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim "msgi" which provides a digest
over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia message.
which does not put in evidence this is a "definition". I would suggest to
change it as:
A PASSporT for an individual message must be different from a
PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream. As such this
document defines a new PASSporT Type:
"msg"
A "msg" PASSporTs may carry a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim named
"msgi"
which provides a digest over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia
message.
No further suggestions from my side.
all the best
Claudio
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