Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-10

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Thanks
Roni

On Fri, 7 Oct 2022 at 8:51 Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-isis-flood-reflection-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-10-06
IETF LC End Date: 2022-10-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The documents is ready for publication as an experimental RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. in sections 4.2 and 4.4 I think that the length field is always 5. so why
not specify this value. 2.In section 7 second paragraph I am not sure what is
the meaning of "very very corner case". is it a unique case or a rare case or
just a corner case? also should there be a comma after "only" so it should be
"only, in which ..." otherwise I am not sure what the sentence means.



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