Hi Florian, Thanks for the review, I have addressed your nits in the next release. > On Oct 12, 2022, at 3:05 AM, Florian Obser via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Florian Obser > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I'm the assigned reviewer of the DNS Directorate for this draft. > This document does not reference the DNS, and has no considerations > that reflect on the DNS. > > The reviewer is not familiar with PASSporT and is not in a position to > make qualified comment on the topic. > That being said, this specification to add signed and integrity > protected rich call data is clearly motivated and the proposed > extension is clearly expressed. > > A list of nits follows. > > Page 5: > 3 times: s/passport/PASSporT/ Fixed > > Page 13: > s/contraint/constraint/ Fixed > > Page 15: > > This document defines a new JSON Web Token claim for "crn", Call > Reason, the value of which is a single string that can contains > information as defined in > > ... that can contain > Fixed > > Page 20 > s/consisent/consistent/ Fixed > > Page 22 > s/PASSport/PASSporT/ Fixed > > Page 25 > s/PASSport/PASSporT/ Fixed > > Page 26 > s/cooresponding/corresponding/ Fixed > > Page 29 > s/availbility/availability/ > > Fixed > -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
