Hi Joe: Thanks for your review of the B100G applicability draft. I have taken your suggestions into account and uploaded v12 of our draft. Please let me know if any additional edits are needed. Regards, radha -----Original Message----- From: Joe Clarke via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> Sent: Wednesday, September 28, 2022 9:29 AM To: ops-dir@xxxxxxxx Cc: ccamp@xxxxxxxx; draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-otn-b100g-applicability.all@xxxxxxxx; last-call@xxxxxxxx Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-otn-b100g-applicability-11 CAUTION: This email originated from outside of the organization. Do not click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. Reviewer: Joe Clarke Review result: Has Nits I have been tasked to review this document on behalf of the OPS DIR. I wouldn't say I'm an expert in this area, but overall I found the draft easy to read, and from an operations point of view I appreciate the succinct applicability summaries, as well as the points to future extensibility work (though I wonder if those deserve their own section for added clarity). On the nits side, I notice you compare your Figure 3 with the figure in Section 3 of RFC7138. However, you omit the notion of labeling the A, B, etc. with "OTN Switch", which I think would help. I'm also not sure what "3R" means here or in Figure 1 (but that is likely my lack of experience here). Finally, the two parts of Figure 3 seem to be showing both one-hop and multi-hop OTUCn links but you do not call that out as is done in RFC7138.
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