Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11

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Hi Jean,

On 07/20, Jean Mahoney via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
> Review result: Ready with Nits

Thanks for taking the time to review.

> I found the draft to be easy to read, and it is ready with just one small issue:
> 
> The 2119 boilerplate needs to be updated to include RFC 8174, and a normative
> reference to that RFC needs to be added. (I see the Doc Shepherd review also
> mentions this.)
> 
> Nits:
> 
>    s/ad-hoc/ad hoc
> 
>    Title of Section 5.2 should be headline capitalized.
> 
>    There are a few places where there's a comma before "because". Those commas
>    should be removed.

Agreed on all counts. Changes addressing the above have been
incorporated into the working document, and we hope to have a new
revision submitted within the next couple of days.

Cheers,

Ben

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