Re: [Last-Call] Last Call: <draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14.txt> (Data Model for Static Context Header Compression (SCHC)) to Proposed Standard

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n 12/07/2022 14:10, The IESG wrote:

The IESG has received a request from the IPv6 over Low Power Wide-Area
Networks WG (lpwan) to consider the following document: - 'Data Model for
Static Context Header Compression (SCHC)'
   <draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model-14.txt> as Proposed Standard

Some editorial quirks.

RFC3168, RFC7641, RFC7959 appear in the YANG module but I do not see them in the I-D References.

In the YANG module and in the text, I see
tick duration
tick-duration
ticks-duration
Consistency is good.

Likewise
YANG id
YANG identifier
YANG referenceid

In compression-rule-entry, the diagram has 'Field 1' the description 'Field ID'

WG List mailto:p-wan

TLP is out of date (but is a challenge to get the current one incorporated)

YANG features could do with references even if only to this I-D

rule-id-value
must be unique considering its length.
I am unsure what this is saying - is it in conjunction with the length?

s.8
The rule contains some sensible informations...
sensitive information?

I have not looked at the technicalities. I hope to but time is against me (yes, I know it is July 26th).

Tom Petch


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Abstract


    This document describes a YANG data model for the SCHC (Static
    Context Header Compression) compression and fragmentation rules.




The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lpwan-schc-yang-data-model/



No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.


The document contains these normative downward references.
See RFC 3967 for additional information:
     rfc7967: Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP) Option for No Server Response (Informational - Independent Submission)




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