> 2022/06/10 5:48、Marc Blanchet <marc.blanchet@xxxxxxxxxxx>のメール: > >> Le 9 juin 2022 à 16:32, Takahiro Nemoto via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> a écrit : >> >> Reviewer: Takahiro Nemoto >> Review result: Ready with Issues >> >> I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. >> >> Summary: >> I think this document is concise and generally good, but a few things are not >> explained well enough. Please consider revising the following points. >> >> Minor issues: >> - It is unclear how to provide "alternative ASCII addresses" in Section 5.3.2 >> and how to distinguish between an EAI address and an alternative ASCII address, >> so it would be better to add an explanation. >> >> - It is unclear how to verify the code points of domain names in Section 8, so >> it would be better to add an explanation. RFC5892 describes how to determine >> the code points that can be used in IDNA2008 but does not describe how to >> validate domain name code points. So it would be easier to convey the intention >> to the reader to write "validate whether the domain name consists of the code >> points allowed by IDNA2008" rather than just writing "validate all code points >> in the domain name according to IDNA2008". Also, if the validation described in >> this section is intended to be compared to the code points listed in Appendix >> B.1. of RFC 5892, it would be better to refer to IDNA Rules and Derived >> Property Values >> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/idna-tables-12.0.0/idna-tables-12.0.0.xhtml> >> listing the latest IDNA Derived Property Values. >> > > Quick comment: the registry has a base URL which redirects to the latest version. So in an RFC, it would be better to refer to that URL: https://www.iana.org/assignments/idna-tables > > Regards, Marc. > Thank you for your quick comment, Mark-san. I think that link is better too. Regards, Nemo > > >> >> _______________________________________________ >> regext mailing list >> regext@xxxxxxxx >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
