Re: [Last-Call] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-06

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Hi Joseph,

thank for your review, much appreciated. More inline.

> Reviewer: Joseph Touch
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
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> 
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> 
> Overall, this document adds useful clarifications to the original RFC on
> tunneling IPsec over TCP. There are a number of issues that should be addressed
> as it proceeds, as noted below. All can be addressed relatively directly (i.e.,
> none create new open issues).
> 
> General comments:
> 
> The document lacks (and would benefit from) a section providing details of the
> differences in this update.

Good point.

can add the following text at the end of 1.1:

In particular:
 o The interpretation of the Length field preceding every message is clarified
 o Use of NAT_DETECTION_*_IP notifications is clarified
 o Retransmission behavior is clarified
 o Using cookie and puzzles is described with more detail
 o Error handling is clarified
 o Implications of TCP encapsulation on IPsec SA processing are expanded
 o Interaction of TCP encapsulation with MOBIKE is clarified
 o Section describing interactions with other IKEv2 extensions is added
 o Recommendation for TLS encapsulation include using TLS 1.3

Is it OK?

> Figures should include captions.

I would leave this to RFC Editor (we tried to keep RFC 8229 text when possible,
and it doesn't have captions too).

> Given the new document adds primarily clarifications, it would be preferable if
> the header numbering were not gratuitously modified vs. the original. The new
> section 2 should be demoted to 1.2 as per the original; this would go a long
> way to avoiding unnecessary confusion between the two.

OK, makes sense.

> Specific suggestions and concerns:
> 
> Section 3 clarifies the meaning of the 16-bit length field as including both
> the message and the message length field. This is counterintuitive and
> problematic, notably because ESP messages could be up to 65535 bytes long. This
> possibility should be addressed (e.g., prohibit tunneling of messages over
> 65533 bytes).

This is a a good catch, we'll add this clarification.

> Section 4.2 claims the length cannot be 0 or 1 bytes; again, this suggests it
> might have been better to have the length field no include the length itself.

The design decision that length field includes both the message and the message
length was made back in 2016 when RFC 8229 was developed to align 
it with 3GPP’s recommendation. We are not in a position to change this design.

> Regardless, it seems there are other lengths that are equally invalid (isn’t
> there a min ESP header size? What about the IP packet header inside)? The true
> min should be indicated.

TCP encapsulation is used for IKE too and "NAT keepalive" messages 
may still be sent by IKE (even they are not needed for TCP), which are 1 byte long.

It's a good question whether empty messages (with Length = 2) are OK.
>From receiver's point of view following the Postel's rule I'd simply ignore them 
and don't tear down TCP...

> Section 7.1 suggests closing idle TCP connections to clean up resources; this
> is inconsistent with TCP’s basic premise (don’t clean it up until those
> resources are used for a new connection). There should be a more direct reason
> given for this change.

If a TCP connection is no more associated with any SA, then it SHOULD be 
deleted by TCP Originator. In some cases the TCP FIN/ACK messages 
will not reach the Responder (e.g. due to network problems), 
so this TCP connection will become an orphan on Responder, 
since no new traffic will ever be sent over it. 
We see no reason to waste Responder's resources in this case - this is the reason.
Note, that this recommendation is MAY, you are free to ignore it.

> Section 7.1 mentions a keep-alive; it would be useful to explain whether this
> is intended to use TCP keepalives or IPsec keepalives or both. It may also be
> important to indicate how these keepalives might interact. This might refer to
> the more detailed discussion in Section 7.6.

Section 7.1 talks about IKE keep-alive messages (more formally called "liveness check" messages).
The idea is that an encrypted and authenticated message must be received,
so that the responder may learn new SPIs, so TCP keep-alives are not suited.

Will add clarification.

> Section 7.2 on retransmissions should explain the need for IPsec to continue to
> retransmit messages even though the transport ensures reliable delivery (e.g.,
> that messages could be ignored or delayed elsewhere in receiver processing).

There is generally no need to do it (except for the situations when TCP connection
is replaced with a new one while waiting for the response). And Section 7.2 
describes it very clear, we think. However, there is no harm if the initiator retransmits 
the request (following IKEv2 recommendations on exponential back-off between retransmissions), 
so some implementations might choose not to complicate retransmission logic and always follow
the same pattern regardless on the transport (note, that TCP encapsulation
adds quite a lot of changes to IKE codebase, so it's a valid desire to minimize them).
Thus "SHOULD NOT" retransmit in the first button in 7.2.

> Section 7.7 discusses the relation of the IPsec DFs to the outer TCP DFs. As
> with all tunnels, there need be no direct relation. The outer TCP header acts
> as a link layer protocol and its frag/reassembly need have no correlation to
> the inner payload. Additionally, it is nonsensical to relate the two for TCP as
> a tunnel because it does not preserve message boundaries of the carried IPsec
> traffic anyway. It might be useful to mention this, rather than indicating this
> as “not possible”. (i.e., even if it were possible, it would be incorrect to do
> so).

We believe that is exactly what Section 7.7 1-st bullet says.
Do you want some specific text to be added here?

(Note, that we are not in a position to discuss generic considerations
of using tunnels, we just explain that what is required 
by RFC 4301, is not possible with TCP. We don't want to discuss
here whether RFC 4301 requirements are wrong).

> Section 10.1 indicates problems with TCP-in-TCP. It would probably be useful to
> provide a citation with better treatment of this issue (e.g,,
> https://www.spiedigitallibrary.org/conference-proceedings-of-spie/6011/1/Understanding-TCP-over-TCP--
> effects-of-TCP-tunneling-on/10.1117/12.630496.short?SSO=1,
> https://link.springer.com/chapter/10.1007/978-981-13-3329-3_32). This is more
> commonly referred to as “TCP meltdown”; bufferbloat is a different phenomenon
> with a different cause (in-network queuing that relies on tail-drop and/or
> lacks ECN), and does not appear relevant to the issues presented in this
> section.

We'd be happy to include good references, but It seems that both articles are behind paywalls, 
or at least require some subscription to be able to read. Do you have some free references? 
Or probably you can craft a proper text to be included in this section?

> Section 11 (security considerations) mentions the new vulnerability introduced
> by the outer TCP layer, but only DoS via SYN-flooding. This connection is also
> susceptible to RST and other spoofing attacks attacks (RFC4953), which should
> be noted as well. Data injection attacks are not possible, but all the rest of
> the TCP machinery remains vulnerable.

Good point, will add clarification and cite RFC 4953.

Regards,
Valery.

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