Thanks for the review! I was asked to respond to your question. I agree
that GEN-7 and GEN-10 may be conspicuous by their absence from the
architecture document.
In the initial context of Broadcast RID, GEN-7 (QoS) is a requirement
primarily on implementations of UAS RID senders that requires no
explicit architectural support. For example: CAAs may require a minimum
rate at which RID information is refreshed; in any sender implementation
intended for use in multiple jurisdictions (or on multiple classes of
aircraft) with different rate requirements, this would thus need to be a
configurable parameter; however it need not be remotely configurable,
thus there is no need to specify a protocol or language for
getting/setting the parameter value. As Network RID matures, GEN-7 may
assume broader significance, but we don't want to embed any guesses as
to that in the current architectural overview. GEN-10 (multicast) is
even more Network RID specific, so likewise to be addressed in future
DRIP documents.
Do you feel that the above information should be reflected explicitly in
the architecture document?
On 4/5/2022 4:07 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready
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Document: draft-ietf-drip-arch-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2022-04-05
IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-06
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
Summary:
The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC
One question: I noticed that the document relates to RFC9153 requirements. I
did not see gen-7 and gen-10 addressed . Gen-7 QoS: DRIP MUST enable
policy-based specification of performance and reliability parameters.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
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