Hi Ketan
Thank you. Looks good to me.
Matthew
From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Thursday, 28 April 2022 at 15:48
To: "Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB)" <matthew.bocci@xxxxxxxxx>
Cc: "rtg-dir@xxxxxxxx" <rtg-dir@xxxxxxxx>, "draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric.all@xxxxxxxx" <draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric.all@xxxxxxxx>, "last-call@xxxxxxxx" <last-call@xxxxxxxx>, lsr <lsr@xxxxxxxx>
Subject: Re: Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospf-reverse-metric-04
Hi Matthew,
Thanks for your review and we've fixed all the nits identified by you in the updated version posted below:
On Wed, Apr 27, 2022 at 9:15 PM Matthew Bocci via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci
Review result: Ready
The draft is basically ready. I found the it easy to read and well written.
Thank you!
I have a few minor nits, intended to improve readability, as follows:
Section 2.2:
"..to a bunch of routers R1 thru RN..." I suggest changing 'thru' to 'through',
to be consistent with the rest of the draft. "...towards the core getting
diverted away..." I suggest changing this to "...towards the core to be
diverted away..."
Section 4 LLS Reverse Metric TLV
Please expand 'LLS' on first use.
Section 6 Procedures, first bullet
"..by any of its neighbor on any of its links..." I suggest changing to "..by
any of its neighbors on any of its links..."
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