> Section 2 is written entirely in the singular about individuals
Yes, deliberately. This is mentioned in 1.1:
1.1. Terminology
This document refers to individual roles in the singular, such as "a
Document Editor." In reality, many roles are filled by more than one
person at the same time. For clarity, this document does not use
phrases like "Chair (or co-chair)."
> It would be helpful for Section 3 to note that with the exception of the General
Area, each Area usually has more than one AD.
I put it in the Area Director, individual section. Okay? Chaired by the IETF Chair is a little clunky, if anyone has suggestions.
; g diff
diff --git a/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md b/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
index 6d26df3..c0fe25d 100644
--- a/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
+++ b/draft-rsalz-2028bis.md
@@ -144,6 +144,9 @@ following a last call. When satisfied, the AD
coordinates the IESG review and IETF last call of
of the document.
+Except for the General Area, which is chaired by the IETF Chair,
+IETF Areas traditionally have multiple Area Directors.
+
# Key Organizations in the Process {#organizations}
The following organizations and organizational roles are involved in
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