looks good to me - one suggestion of clearer language and a potential addition > o Documents for which special rules exist, including IAB documents > and April 1st RFCs, and republication of documents from other SDOs > - the IESG and the RFC Editor keep a running dialogue on which > documents these are awkward wording - maybe you want to say o The IESG and the RFC Editor keep a running dialogue on which documents require special rules (for example, IAB documents, April 1st RFCs, and republication of documents from other SDOs) section 3 > The IESG may return five different responses this misses one of the outcomes listed in RFC 2026 - specifically (quoting from 2026): "the IESG recommends that the document be brought within the IETF and progressed within the IETF context" this path has been used from time to time and I think it is a valuable option - I'd suggest that it be added as a 6th response Scott _______________________________________________ Ietf@xxxxxxxx https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf