Reviewer: Ted Lemon Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. I do not see any issues in this document that would suggest that the INT Area directors should object to it. The document appears to be a combination of three things: a description of the context in which what is specified would be useful; a collection of advice about operational considerations when using what is specified; and finally the actual specification. To the best of my ability to evaluate it, it seems to be complete, and it should be possible to use it as a basis for an implementation. Although I would prefer to see this document published as three separate documents, each addressing one of the aforementioned topics, I don't think that's a reasonable request to make during last call. As such, I'm going to say that the document is ready to publish as is. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
