Elwyn, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-12-23, at 16:41, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-targeted-cache-control-02 > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 2021-12-23 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-12-23 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready except for a couple of nits and one possibe issue with an > informational reference that is not freely accessible to readers of the future > RFC. I also wondered if a little more emphasis on the potential interactions > between multiple types of cache would be desirable. > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > s2.3, para 4: The infomational reference [AGE-PENALTY] is not a publically > available document. This is not a vital reference and I expect that people > trying to build a CDN cache system would be aware of this discussion but it > would be useful to have a reference that is publically available to explain the > issue. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > s2.1, para 1: A reference to the IANA page for the is desirable > (https://www.iana.org/assignments/http-cache-directives/http-cache-directives.xhtml) > > s2.2, para 1: s/A cache that implement/A cache that implements/ > > s2.3, para 1: In the last sentence: > In particular, a targeted cache might have longer freshness lifetimes available > to it than other caches, causing it to serve responses that appear to be > prematurely (or even immediately) stale to them, > > It needs to be adjusted to make it clear what the final 'them' refer to.. > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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