Christer, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document. Lars > On 2021-6-11, at 10:58, Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review result: Almost Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ospfv3-codepoint-04 > Reviewer: Christer Holmberg > Review Date: 2021-06-11 > IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-21 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: The document is easy to read, and is almost ready for publication. > However, I do have a few editorial comments that I would like the authors to > address. > > Major issues: N/A > > Minor issues: N/A > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Q1: > > The Abstract and Introductions says: > > "This document proposes the code point to be used in the Segment ID > Sub-TLV and Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV when the IGP is OSPFv3." > > I suggest to say "specifies" or "defines" instead of "proposes". > > Q2: > > Would it be more clear to call Section 6 "Update to RFC 8287"? > > Q3: > > Section 6 says: > > "This document specifies that the above code points will be used only for > OSPFv2." > > I suggest to be more explicit, and say something like: > > "This document updates RFC 8287, by specifying that the "OSPF" code points > will be used only for OSPFv2." > > Q4: > > Section 7.2 adds a note to the IANA registry for the existing "OSPF" code > point. Should this specification also be added as a reference for the existing > "OSPF" code point (in addition to RFC 8287? > > > > -- > last-call mailing list > last-call@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
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