Reviewer: Benjamin Schwartz Review result: Ready This document is ready with a few minor clarifications. It does not seem to require detailed Security Area review. Section 2.1 "printable ASCII characters": Needs reference to what qualifies as "printable ASCII". "color is a 32-bit numerical value": specify unsigned? Section 2.4 "represented as a 4-byte number": In what byte order? Section 9 "Protection": It's not clear who this is protecting from what. Possible alternative title: "Recovering from segment failure". -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
