Reviewer: Will LIU Review result: Has Nits Hi all, I have reviewed draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24 as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. “This document describes YANG data modules for the configuration and management of DHCPv6 (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6 RFC8415) servers, relays, and clients.” My overall view of the document is 'Has Nits'. ** Technical ** Page54, 1. The DHCPv6 server may be bound to an interface to specify the DHCPv6 address pool of the corresponding interface. 2. The key of container address-pools and container prefix-pools in the DHCPv6 server may be changed to pool-name. ** Editorial ** No. Regards, Will (Shucheng LIU) -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
