Reviewer: Xufeng Liu
Review result: Ready with Nits
Thanks to authors for addressing the previous review comments.
The updates look good. The followings are a few additional nits:
1) In the model, “container flow-spec” has been changed to “container
traffic-spec”, but the description has not been updated, shown as below:
container traffic-spec {
description
"Flow-specification specifies how the Source transmits
packets for the flow. This is the promise/request of the
Source to the network. The network uses this flow
specification to allocate resources and adjust queue
parameters in network nodes.";
2) Most names of list and leaf-list have been fixes. The following three were
missed: “leaf-list member-apps” should be “leaf-list member-app” “leaf-list
member-services” should be “leaf-list member-service” “leaf-list
member-fwd-sublayers” should be “leaf-list member-fwd-sublayer”
3) Section 10. Security Considerations would need to include a list of
“sensitive or vulnerable” nodes. RFC 8349 shows an example.
Thanks,
- Xufeng
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