Re: BCP97bis

[Russ Housley <housley@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On Oct 16, 2021, at 12:56 AM, Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Russ,

On Fri, Oct 15, 2021 at 12:27 PM Russ Housley <housley@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

I have on concern and a few editorial suggestions.

CONCERN

Section 4.1 says:

   o  A note is included in the reference text that indicates that the

      reference is to a target document of a lower maturity level, that

      some caution should be used since it may be less stable than the

      document from which it is being referenced, and, optionally,

      explaining why the downref is appropriate.

There are many cases where cryptographic algorithms are specified in Informational RFC, and then a Standards-Track document is used to specify protocol conventions for using that algorithm.  the algorithm specification is not unstable, and requiring a note like this sends the wrong message to the reader.

Interesting.  This text is preserved from RFC 4897.  But now that you mention it, I don't think this particular bit of process has ever been used for as long as I've been observing.

Also, the paragraph immediately after that one gives the IESG discretion about what such a note should include.  The case you cite seems to me to be an ideal one in which to use that discretion, perhaps with the advice of the authors/editors/chairs.

I think that the text should be included ONLY when the downref is less stable than the document making the reference.

EDITORIAL

Section 1 says:

   It should also be noted that Best Current Practice documents

   [RFC1818] have generally been considered similar to Standards Track

   documents in terms of what they can reference.  For example, a

   normative reference to an Experimental RFC has been considered an

   improper reference per [RFC2026].

These two sentences are not really making the same point.  With the second sentence starting with "For example", I expected it to be related to the first sentence.

And that one is copied right out of RFC 3967, which got all this started.  But I agree.  Perhaps "For example, a normative reference from a BCP to an Experimental ..." ?

That is an improvement.

Section 1.1 uses the term "new RFC".  However, the "new" is not needed.  The defintion ofr a normative reference apply to very old RFCs too.

Also copied from RFC 3967, but I agree.  Will edit accordingly.

Thanks.

Russ