| Hi Joe,
Thank you for your review and comments.
Please let us know if you have any questions. Best, Tobias
Reviewer: Joe Clarke
Review result: Has Nits
I have been tasked to review this document on behalf of the OPS Area
Directorate. This document describes an EPP extension for conveying
maintenance events to EPP clients. Overall, I find the document mostly ready,
but I do have a few questions, and I found a few typos.
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Section 3.3
What is the use case for having <maint:start> be equal to <maint:end>? I would
think you'd always want the end time to be in the future to be a relevant
maintenance event.
TS: Good point. Fixed, we removed the part “be equal to".
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Section 3.3
s/negotiated value is something other then the/negotiated value is something
other than the/
TS: Fixed. ===
Section 3.3
If one of the intervention elements is true, how does one find out the details
of the connection or implementation-related intervention? I imagine the URI
would provide that, but I was expecting to see it stated in this document in
the description of these elements.
TS: Fixed, we added a reference to <maint:detail> in the description.
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Section 4.1.4
s/command and response is defined/command and response are defined/
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