On Sun, Jun 06, 2021 at 11:13:23PM -0700, Suhas Nandakumar via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote a message of 72 lines which said: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft Thanks for the review. > Section 2.3 > 1. MAX_MINIMISE_COUNT and MINIMISE_ONE_LAB - are the values for these constants > normatively defined or are they just recommendations ? Can the same be > clarified in the document ? The sentence "a good value is 10" seems to me indicating that it is just a possible value. The important thing is to have a limit. Do we think it should be rewritten with RFC 2119 words? MUST have a limit and the RECOMMENDED value is 10? > Section 4. > The section starts with query for "foo.bar.baz.example" and walk through refers > to a.b.example.org as query input. Also no reference to ns1.nic.example seems > to be appear in the detailed flows. > Can this be updated it to match overall ? Actually, there are *two* independant requests. One for foo.bar.baz.example and one afterwards ("Here are more detailed examples") for a.b.example.org. In the first one, ns1.nic.example is indeed used. Should we use the same QNAME for both? > Section 5 > "QNAME minimisation may also improve lookup performance for TLD > operators. For a TLD that is delegation-only, a two-label QNAME > query may be optimal for finding the delegation owner name, depending > on the way domain matching is implemented." > This para doesn't clarify how the performance will be improved. Can it > be extended with some context around the same. With QNAME minimisation, an authoritative name server MAY use exact matching ("do I know foobar.example?") while without it, it MUST use tree matching ("do I know thing.stuff.foobar.example or an ancestor of it?") and tree matching is typically slower. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call