Ines, Thanks for the review. On 29-Dec-20 07:19, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote: ... > Nits: > > 1-Abstract: > > apply to one, or at most two, Nominating Committee cycles -> should be added > consecutive cycles? OK > > 2-Section 1: > > It would be nice to expand the first time NomCom --> NomCom (Nominating > Committee) OK > > 3-Section 2: > > the IESG must consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and the > 2020-2021 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report --> the IESG must > consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report We want to consult the previous Chair too, because they are automatically in the next committee and are well-placed to compare the old and new procedures. > > 4-Section 4: > > Has been a Working Group Chair or Secretary within .... -> ... IETF/IRTF > Working Group Chair or Secretary? This is the IETF NomCom so why would IRTF experience help? > nomcom -> NomCom OK Best wishes for 2021! Brian -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call