Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-proxy-arp-nd-09 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2020-12-04 IETF LC End Date: 2020-12-15 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: There is a normative downward reference to Informational RFC 6820. It looks to me like this should be an informative reference. Minor Concerns: The Abstract seems very long. I suggest: This document describes the EVPN Proxy-ARP/ND function, augmented by the capability of the ARP/ND Extended Community. Together, these help operators of Internet Exchange Points (IXPs), Data Centers (DCs), and other networks deal with IPv4 and IPv6 address resolution issues associated with large Broadcast Domains (DBs) by reducing and even suppressing the flooding produced by address resolution in the EVPN network. Nits: When there is a line break in the middle of "->", it is quite difficult to read. I hope there is a way to make the hyphen non-breaking. s2.2: s/devices and therefore floods/devices, and therefore, floods/ s2.2: s/messages, however ARP/messages; however, ARP/ s6.5: s/IXP's peering network space/IXP peering network space/ s7: s/flooded, however the/flooded; however, the/ s7: s/will definitely protect/protects/ IDnits reports: == The 'Updates: ' line in the draft header should list only the _numbers_ of the RFCs which will be updated by this document (if approved); it should not include the word 'RFC' in the list. -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
